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Post by Vala on Feb 26, 2005 6:55:19 GMT -5
I wish everyone would identify theirs. They were all great. Mine was number 27 (it wasn't very good!) and i agree about the voting process, maybe it needs to be looked at if there is another poetry or writing based competition.
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Post by mothperson on Feb 26, 2005 8:20:46 GMT -5
Spike wouldn't whine. No - wait. He would. Never mind.
I copied the poems onto a document so I could see them together before voting. Thanks people, for identifying yourselves, if you did.
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Post by rockforlove on Feb 26, 2005 18:31:56 GMT -5
Mine was entry 13. I was happy with it.
I dwell in darkness; She's the light. I look at her and need no sun. But I'm unseen, Eclipsed by him, the foul moon, A Champion.
Who blocks her beams Toward other men, And clouds her sight, no light shines through Below I dwell, In hopes her rays will shine on me--yet never do.
I thought this past the End of Days And gave life for many Chosen. Then She saw me; said "I love You". And clouds that he had cast were broken. . .
At last, the sun gave warmth to me; At last, for me, the skies were opened.
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Post by Justhad on Feb 26, 2005 19:05:22 GMT -5
Mine was 25. I did mine in free verse.
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Post by The Second Evil on Feb 27, 2005 3:38:15 GMT -5
Mine was poem 11. I don't think it was very good, though.
It wasn't right It wasn't fair She forced me to feel and care Where's William the Bloody? Where has he gone? That lust for the kill And hurt, so strong
I spent my life, a sad old boy Spent my afterlife, so full of joy But it wasn't too long Till' things went wrong...
Fighting the good fight isn't so great Uncertain fears, uncertain fate, Then I fell for her - A sorrowful state I was just a tool, for her to fool Where's William the Bloody? Where has he gone? Those thoughts and feelings They felt so wrong
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Post by JDjnr on Mar 4, 2005 11:52:51 GMT -5
WOOHOO! I won. I wasn't able to vote or post earlier since my computer isn't working, right now I'm using someone elses. Well done to Dl and all the other people who won, I just had a quick look at htem and they are great
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