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Post by Afer on Nov 28, 2005 17:32:16 GMT -5
Old Feuds ReturnSet season 5Willow/Tara's DormWillow: Hey baby, I'm back. Tara smiled gently, closing the door behind willow. Tara: You all lectured out? Willow: You don't know the half of it! Two hours i sat in that hall listening to the lecturer talk about healthy sex and male sperm being a good moisturizer. I felt like saying "Hello, lesbian. Don't plan on rubbing male semen on my face anytime soon!" Tara: Willow! Tara gave her a cheeky grin and picked up her bag. Tara: We should really get the the magic box, Anya is all on her own and plus she would find this... topic interesting. Willow: I don't really get why Giles and Buffy are away on this trip anyway. I mean Buffy just said that it was a slayer watcher thing but there must be something more to it than that. Tara: Well if Buffy wants you to know then she will tell you. Maybe they are just away camping to see the stars outside the town. Willow: Buffy... camping, god help Giles! Tara: He can handle her! Hey look at that crystal i got from the magic box yesterday, pretty cute, huh? If Anya asks where it has gone, deny all knowledge of seeing it. They both smiled and headed for the exit. Willow blew out the candle sitting on the table and followed Tara out the dorm room.
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Post by hitnrun017 on Nov 28, 2005 17:45:36 GMT -5
LMAO!
I think it's a great start. Can't wait to see Anya and the next episode!
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Post by Afer on Nov 28, 2005 17:56:07 GMT -5
Scene 2Magic BoxAnya: Ohh, thank god you both are here! This shop has me running about, stressed! Willow: Thats called working, a job Anya! Anya: Very funny, miss collage girl. Your just too lazy to get out into the working environment, your hanging on! Willow: Your comebacks are getting worse each day. willow mumbled under her voice. She looked at Tara behind her to receive a dirty look. This was Tara's only serious face willow had ever crossed paths with. Tara: Maybe you two need another troll come and visit and bring peace to you both again! All went silent. Thankfully Tara thought approaching Anya at the counter. Tara: Thats what i thought. How is xander anyway? Anya: He is at the hospital right now, the doctors wanted to do a check-up. Tara: Nice to hear he is doing better. Anya: I didn't say that. But thanks for the inappropriate, kind comment humans throw at you in a time of need for support, even if it is pointless and confusing like your one. Willow: Anyway, patrolling tonight? Well about 10 minutes. We will help you with the last customers then we will head to the dark alleys and cemeteries! Anya: First of all, i can handle customers fine on my own, in fact excellent on my own so i don't need your help if thats what your implying. You can hang around and sort out tonights armory though. Its in the back training room. Giles left some stuff out for us. Tara: I'm not to good with the whole, killing thing. Can i like keep the car warm or something. Anya: I can drive! Willow and Tara: NO!Anya: OK, and if i have to get down and dirty with the undead to get a bonus pay rise, so do you! Tara: You are getting paid extra to go out patrolling?! Anya: No, but i tell myself that to motivate me to go. Willow came out from the training room with stakes, a knife and some crosses all huddled in a small brown leather bag. Willow: Are we ready to go kick some demons butts? Tara: Lets get going. Anya: Pay rise, I'm getting a pay rise. Anya told her self over and over, lying to herself.
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Post by Afer on Nov 28, 2005 18:22:46 GMT -5
Scene 3- Final SceneAferton Cemetery Willow: I've kind of got a lust for this killing thing now! 3 vamps in the one night! I would be lucky to bruise a vampire a couple of years ago! Tara: Do vampire bruise? I mean they are dead? Willow: Well actually I'm not sure! Technically the skin cells are dead so any bruises will not show because the skin is dead. Anya: Are all gay couples as weird as you both? Willow: What?!? What do you mean by wier-- Anya: Well do all gay people talk about dead cell thingies. I mean its not couples because me and xander never talk about it, we always talk about sex. I suppose to a degree that involves skin, but that skin is sweaty and tense and sometimes wet, depending on the mood of xand----" Willow: ANYA! Why are you so rude! I will never be able to look at him in the same way again! Ewww! Tara: Well, its not a gay thing, or a couple thing...its a, kill demon, kinda thing! Willow: Yeah, thats it! Willow was confused and disturbed all at once. After everything that her and Anya went through just days ago with the whole troll event, she learned that the only way to not get annoyed by Anya's comments/ remarks/ disgusting topics, was to accept them. This annoyed her even more. Anya: Anyway, this place is dark. We have already done 3 so can't we just call it a -- Willow: Who has done 3? I have! Anya: OK, you have but still, we have done our Charlie's angel theme for tonight. Can we not just call it a night? Willow: No, what if a vampire rises tonight, seconds after we leave and kills a innocent because we left early. Tara: baby, it is eleven thirty. Anya: Thank you! Woohoo, looks like the sweaty skin will be showing up tonight. IF he ever gets out. There are always men who do deliveries is there not. Like the pizza man? Willow: Anya, the pizza man delivers pizza's, nothing else but pizza's and with xanders broken arm i don't think much sweat will be pouring tonight. Anya: Bummer! And what makes you think that? The broken arm thing is even more kinkier, in my opinion. Tara: We will stay a little longer, there is bound to be something evil wanting some blood. But no more scary talk, we will scare away the evil! Agreed? Willow: AGREED!Anya: Agreed, but that is a bummer about the pizza guy... Tara: Yeah well if this stays a slow night you can order your pizza man. But it doesn't look like there will be any vampires tonight...
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Post by Insanity on Nov 28, 2005 18:35:35 GMT -5
Very cool. I really like the screen caps used to enhance the sense of scenery. Very funny! can't wait to see more!
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Post by Afer on Nov 28, 2005 18:36:12 GMT -5
Dru: Sunnydale, the source of all things evil and yummy for ma' tummy. Darla: Well it will have to do for now Dru. I don't think we should be here. Angel might contact the slayer to kill us if she finds us. Dru: We have just arrived though grand mum. Angels fireworks party, using us as the rockets. He set both of us ablaze. How could he, Was that Angels? Darla: No, it was darker than that. I could see it in him, sense it. That was pure evil at it's finest! But i think we should have stayed in LA and got wolfram hart to deal with the problem instead of running away. We will look like cowards to angel! I can't have him thinking that he has won this. He may have won the battle, but that doesn't come close to winning the war. Dru: What about my beloved spike. I have been told that he is being hold hostage in his own brain by the army. Thousands of tin soldiers thumping away in his head. Must be hell. We mus get him back. He will ruin angel. Darla: Your right, but what about Lindsey and the other girl. They must be more help than William! Dru: William, My William. I must have him back mom, please, pretty please. Darla: If you must, but first, we will have a little late night snack. Dru: 3 pretty maids all in a row, One falls down and BAMM all gone. They both grinned and stared at Tara, Anya and Willow, ready to eat...
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Post by Afer on Nov 28, 2005 18:39:42 GMT -5
[glow=Blue,2,300]To Be Continued![/glow] [glow=red,2,300]Episode Two Up Next Monday[/glow] [glow=green,2,300]Comments Here Please![/glow] [glow=purple,2,300]Happy Thanksgiving![/glow]
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Post by hitnrun017 on Nov 28, 2005 18:49:07 GMT -5
That was really cool! I really liked the cemetery part. Can't wait to see the next episode!
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Post by Chosen Prophecy on Nov 28, 2005 18:55:24 GMT -5
i cant wait!! It was so great bravo!
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Post by SideStrike on Nov 28, 2005 20:35:34 GMT -5
That was good! But I think it was kinda a little short and too much dialogue per picture
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Post by Afer on Nov 29, 2005 11:26:19 GMT -5
I wanted alot of dialogue because i think it makes the scenes more real and gives the chractes more level. I, myself found this episode a little short but there are lots more episodes to come and they aren't as rushed as this. Do you like the edited pictures? They took my a while, the cemetery took the longest because i had to make it up in bits. More comments would be nice and thanks for all the nice comments!
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Post by SideStrike on Nov 29, 2005 12:17:01 GMT -5
I wanted alot of dialogue because i think it makes the scenes more real and gives the chractes more level. I, myself found this episode a little short but there are lots more episodes to come and they aren't as rushed as this. Do you like the edited pictures? They took my a while, the cemetery took the longest because i had to make it up in bits. More comments would be nice and thanks for all the nice comments! I totally understand alot of dialogue but im saying there should be more pictures of them with the dialogue... Like change camera angle or position of figures. Like you say shes picking up the bag.. why not show that shes picking up the bag too? I really liked the scenery. Especially the magic box. That was very creative and I dont think anyone would have thought of that. Kudos!
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Post by SlayerLV on Dec 1, 2005 1:10:55 GMT -5
It's awesome so far I can't wait for episode 2.
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Post by JBHpet on Dec 2, 2005 12:26:20 GMT -5
I love it!
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Post by Thorn Of Deucalion on Dec 3, 2005 2:36:33 GMT -5
omg there so cool , keep them coming !
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Post by Afer on Dec 3, 2005 6:46:42 GMT -5
Episode 2 Will Be Up On Monday! A promo is up now (below)
Thanks to everyone who read episode one and posted. It is always nice to hear comments (good or bad) so if you read it and thought, that was poor, post saying, or if you thought those pictures didn't help me Imagen the scene or even better, good comments. Keep them coming and cheers! (Also check out SideStricks series coming soon!)
Thanks again!
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Post by Afer on Dec 3, 2005 13:48:44 GMT -5
Coming Soon... They are back, and ready for the kill and thrill of living on the helmouth. The only result... Someone might get hurt. See what happens when the slayer isn't there to protect her closest friends from the onething she was chosen to fight, vampires. Will Buffy Come back just in time to save her friends from death? Find out in an all new, original episode two of the AFS. ""The Girls Are Back"" Comes a forum near you, on monday. Slay on.......
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Post by SideStrike on Dec 3, 2005 17:30:37 GMT -5
Looking GOOD! ;D
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Post by hitnrun017 on Dec 3, 2005 19:01:12 GMT -5
Sounds great! I can't wait!
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Post by SlayerLV on Dec 4, 2005 2:22:45 GMT -5
It's sounds totally cool. I can't wait to see it.
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