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Post by Afer on Dec 5, 2005 15:11:56 GMT -5
I have decided to make this second episode a two part episode to keep the ""fans""  on their toes! Part one will be up in about an hour i'm just finishing the images! |
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Post by Afer on Dec 5, 2005 15:26:48 GMT -5
 Dru: Sunnydale, the source of all things evil and yummy for ma' tummy. Darla: Well it will have to do for now Dru. I don't think we should be here. Angel might contact the slayer to kill us if she finds us. Dru: We have just arrived though grand mum. Angels fireworks party, using us as the rockets. He set both of us ablaze. How could he, Was that Angels? Darla: No, it was darker than that. I could see it in him, sense it. That was pure evil at it's finest! But i think we should have stayed in LA and got wolfram hart to deal with the problem instead of running away. We will look like cowards to angel! I can't have him thinking that he has won this. He may have won the battle, but that doesn't come close to winning the war. Dru: What about my beloved spike. I have been told that he is being hold hostage in his own brain by the army. Thousands of tin soldiers thumping away in his head. Must be hell. We mus get him back. He will ruin angel. Darla: Your right, but what about Lindsey and the other girl. They must be more help than William! Dru: William, My William. I must have him back mom, please, pretty please. Darla: If you must, but first, we will have a little late night snack. Dru: 3 pretty maids all in a row, One falls down and BAMM all gone.  Anya: Hold that thought Tara. I just heard something. Willow: Anya, we are in a graveyard, be a little more specific! Anya: An evil something! Willow sighed and took a few steps forward to look further into the misty graveyard. Willow: I don't hear anything.  Tara: Maybe it was the wind or something you heard? Anya: I'm telling you .. Darla: No, I'm telling you! Darla screamed, throwing the hammer down, hard and fast. |
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Post by Afer on Dec 5, 2005 16:04:54 GMT -5
Anya dodged the hammer as it slammed on the ground hard and fast. Darla: When you are all creeping about a cemetery playing most haunted, you would think you would no what you are doing. Anya: HEY! Tara: Willow! Willow turned back to Anya, Tara and.. Willow: Darla?! Darla: Who the hell are you sweetie pie? Willow: You're dead! Darla: Yeah, and have been for a long time now! God, you girls are fast! Willow: No, Angel killed you in the bronze like, five years ago. I was there! Darla: Ohh, you are the redhead who was helping Buffy with her homework in the schools library? Willow: What? You know the high school was blew up! Darla: Ohh, really! Willow nodded. Darla's fangs glittered in the moonlight, giving willow a shiver up her spine. Willow: How have you been? Darla: Well, my ex hubbie killed me with a splinter, Spent centuries in hell, was brought back by a evil law firm, bent on Angel's death and hear i am having some fun. The usual. Darla smiled. Tara looked from willow to the vampire, to Anya and back at willow. She knew willow was stalling, but for what...It wasn't like they could do anything! Tara: How was hell?  Darla laughed, reaching for her hammer, dug deep in the grass. Darla: I may be old, but I'm not stupid! Tara looked at willow panicky. Willow: Anya, move! Willow grabbed a stake and went for Darla as she raised her hammer.  |
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Post by Afer on Dec 5, 2005 16:17:54 GMT -5
The hammer and the stake clashed together and both, fell to the dirt. Darla: MY HAND! You will pay for that! She growled, showing her fangs. She threw her elbow back hard and hit Anya in the face, knocking her to the ground. Tara: Anya!  Willow: You will pay for that. You should have stayed in hell, bitchDarla: You should have stayed in the books. Darla laughed and grabbed willow, blocking her punches. Darla: Who will pay? You She sunk her fangs deep into willows neck as willow let out a yelp. Tara: WILLOW! No!!  ****  Tara: Willow!! Darla: You no what they say, Once you have had a redhead, u never wanna go back. Darla grinned as blood fell down her chin. Willow let out one last moan, before passing out. Anya slowly sneaked up behind Darla and forced the knife deep into her back.  Darla: ArahhhhhhhhAnya: That will kill her, right? Darla: Wrong! Darla growled, hitting Anya hard in the face. Tara: You will pay for that. All of this. Darla grinned, turning to face at Tara. She let go of willow and let her fall to the grass. Anya yelped in pain as blood poured from her top lip.  Darla: Is that right sweetie? Dru, where are you? Tara didn't wait to see who, or what Dru was, so she acted quickly on her feelings, rage. She started chanting in ancient pepsorian.  Inflict my victim, her the wind take her, carry her. Take Her!  **** Tara: Anya, are you okay? Anya: I'll live. My first battle wound! Tara: I have a feeling it won't be the last Anya: Well Buffy gets back soon. Tara: Yeah, Next week! Anya: Just say soon, it sounds closer! Tara: Willow... They both fell to her aid, checking for a pulse. Tara: Thank God! Shes got a pulse! Anya: Good! Now heal her. Tara: I can't. Lift her and we will take her back tho the dorm. Anya: How can you not? You managed to send Darfa flying in the sky, so why can't you heal Willow. Have you lost your mojo? Like Austin Powers did in--  Tara: You don't understand! Magic is complicated Anya. Once We get her back to the dorm, I'll try a healing spell. Anya: Ohh, okay. Willow's eyes slowly opened. She gasped as much oxygen into her as possible. She felt the injury. Tara: Willow, Thank god! Anya: Ohh, Thank God... Your awake so i don't have t carry you back to your room anymore! Willow: Bite Me! Willow and Tara hugged each other and headed home, after making sure Anya was in and safe. Tara healed willow that night, and not just the wound!  |
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Post by hitnrun017 on Dec 5, 2005 17:23:26 GMT -5
Great episode! I hate cliffhangers!
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Post by cordanya on Dec 5, 2005 21:58:01 GMT -5
Great episode.
I wonder what happens in part 2.
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Post by SideStrike on Dec 5, 2005 22:51:05 GMT -5
Awesome! And the plot thickenss!!!!!
I hate that i have to wait another week dammit!
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Post by SlayerLV on Dec 6, 2005 0:54:22 GMT -5
Oooh cliffhanger, I hate them so much. I can't wait to see more.
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Post by Afer on Dec 17, 2005 12:05:04 GMT -5
Thats part two up evrey1!! Sorry about the lateness, But for a xmas treat you will get episode 3 as normal on Monday so two episodes in the space of 2 days! lol The conclusion of this episode should be up in about 10 minutes. (Under this post)
I just added the second part on to the first incase you would like to recapp on the entire episode (episode 1 is also still up)
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Post by Afer on Dec 17, 2005 12:32:28 GMT -5
 Darla: This Place is disgusting! I would have never allowed angelus to stay hear! Dru: He liked this place too. We would bring dead girls from the shop in here and suck them dry. Good times. Darla: My back is killing me! It better heal fast. Not like you helped! Dru: Sorry grand mum. i was taken away by the stars. A trip round the planets, catching the stars as i went along. The bunnies also helped me. Dara: What? In fact, never mind Dru. That witch was strong. Dru: Which Witch? Always skulking in the shadows, hunting, chanting, cursing... Darla: The blonde one. She was powerful.  Dru: She sent you flying with the stars. You should have joined me. Darla: Shut up Dru! Dru: mmmmm. Sorry. Dru: I'm hungry mum. Darla: Well if you didn't run away and leave me to fight off two witches and a weak girl with a knife then you wouldn't be! Dru said nothing but pretend not to hear Darla. Darla: Where was the slayer? The girl i drank said she knew me because of the slayer. She wasn't there. Dru: Buffy She hissed. Darla: Well with backup like that, the slayer is not a likely target for demons anymore. Dru: Spike, where is my darling spike? Darla: We will go to spike in due time Drusilla!  Darla: But first, we make that witch pay for what she did to me. And this time...Dru...no flying away with the stars....... ****  Willow: I'm lucky. Thats what i am. Tara: Yeah, so was Anya! She could have killed you for stabbing her. Anya: I wished I never now! Tara: But who was Dru. She was shouting on someone with that name. Willow: Drusilla! Ohh no. If it is her, then we are in for some trouble. Darla and Dru. Anya: Just as well i called Giles' cell then isn't it. Him and Buffy are finishing off the course tomorrow and should be home within the next three to four days.  Willow: Anya, you shouldn't have done that. Buffy and Giles need time alone. Slayer/ watcher time. Anya: Well they have been gone two days already. I couldn't last two days in the middle of the desert with Giles never mind a full week! Tara: Willow, Anya maybe right. It is safer this way. I Imagen this isn't the last time we will hear of these two. They will want revenge.  ...... Willow: No, this isn't over yet....  |
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Post by Afer on Dec 17, 2005 12:39:56 GMT -5
 Episode 3. Up Monday. Bufy has returned to Sunnydale after hearing news of 2 deadly vampires on the loose, but these undead vixians are the least of her troubles when tara is visited by a higher being with a very important message. Up Monday! Also See Episode 1 + 2 of season 1 of the Action Figure Series (afs)! ----- afer ----- |
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Post by hitnrun017 on Dec 17, 2005 12:43:40 GMT -5
I really liked the conclusion! I loved how Anya called Darla, Darfa. I can't wait for Buffy to come back!
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Post by Afer on Dec 18, 2005 10:26:25 GMT -5
I'm trying to make it obvious that that little jewl we are seeing in willow and taras dorm, and now the magic box, is a little more than meets the eye! lol and I was worried incase people thought the "Darfa" was a spelling error, it wasn't! Lol thanks hnr!
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Post by SideStrike on Dec 18, 2005 21:15:05 GMT -5
I really like it. Its turning into a great season already!
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Post by SlayerLV on Dec 18, 2005 23:55:06 GMT -5
I agree with SideStrike. I can't wait to see more.
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Post by Girl Power on Apr 16, 2006 22:18:47 GMT -5
Ooh, I love Dru taking Darla to the mansion. That is so cool! Fun to hear a bit more about what when on there when Angel was Angelus.
I love the dialogue, as usual. I can imagine all the characters saying their lines. I don't feel the need for more pictures, because the dialogue and action are very well-written.
I especially loved the exchange between Willow and Darla. It brought back how they know each other from the past. The lines about "You should have stayed in Hell," and "You should have stayed in your books" were hilarious.
The funnest part was how Tara's rage brought power she's never shown before. What a cool idea! It was so exciting!
You have really thought through how the characters fit together, as well as great creative new directions. I love it!
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Post by ShondraSu on Apr 16, 2006 22:52:32 GMT -5
This is great! Can't wait to see what happens next.
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on their toes! Part one will be up in about an hour i'm just finishing the images!
