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Previously on AFS..













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Tara: Buffy!What was that spell i was reading yesterday?



Tara: Juci drikantio tindra releassen speakanto..

A second later the dragon beast howled as an electric volt shot through it. It released the unconscious slayer from its grasp as it growled in pain. Buffy fell to the quick sand, sinking.



Tara: Buffy, wake up..Buffy.





Tara: Araahhhh!

The beast sunk its enormous fangs deep into Tara's arm. She felt the poison run through her veins as the beasts scales rubbed her skin.

Tara: Willow...



The weight of the beast crushed her arm, she was paralyzed. Tara shivered as her vision went from bad, to worse. A second later, a huge battle-Axe sliced straight into the beast's chest. It shrieked in pain as its tail waggled in the air. Its firery red eyes widened as it claws drew together. The dragon demon finally toppled to the sand, the Axe still in its chest. She looked over to see Buffy still sleeping in the sand.





Tara: Anya..

Anya: Wow, that was fun. I never thought nearly dying could make you feel so alive!

Tara: Anya, help me, get willow..help Buffy..get will-

Anya: You better not be dead! I didn't kill a giant lizard thing for you to rest your eyes! Buffy!

Anya tip-toed from rock to rock as Buffy's eyes slowly but surely opened. Buffy looked from side to side. The sand engulfed her. Anya she screamed as her shoulders went under the grainy death bed.

Anya: Hang on, these shoes won't allow me to cross this dam rock! Can't you pretend you are swimming. Try the back stroke..

Buffy: Anya!

Anya: OK, the leaping frog?..Oh right.



Anya pulled buffy from the sand. She got to air and gasped for as much air as her lungs would allow. Willow came running down the rocky stairs and fell to Tara's aid. Her and Anya lifted her from the stones and carried her back up through the rocky hell dimension and back up through the sewer. Buffy stayed an extra minute to take a few breaths and get feeling back in her arms. They tingled, they were OK. She stood above the dragon beast's body then wrapped her hands round the handle of the Axe and yanked it from the demons chest. The bones collapsed as the rocks around it did. The cracks got bigger until they gave in and crumbled into the sand taking the body with them. She sighed in relief and headed up back into the sewer.



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Anya: Should i not be on the front page of the local newspaper or something? I'm like the town hero?

Tara: What? You expect Sunnydale Times to know about a secret hell dimension which was abducting higher beings and stripping them of there powers, leaving Buffy to die in quicksand and nearly killing me with its venom?

Anya: Well, they seem to catch celebs everywhere, so why not me?

Buffy:Anyway did Willow heal you alright Tara?

Tara: Yeah, thanks. She just healed my arm and sucked the venom out of my blood.

Buffy: Killer.?

Tara: Yeah, i think so. I'm lucky i got it out my system as soon as i did! Willow is actually keeping it.

Anya: In case you go back to the penis?

Tara: No, for a potion, Anya!

Anya: Thats what she tells you!

Tara: She said it was for a spell she was working on!



Buffy: Speaking of..

Anya: Penis's..

Buffy: Unfortunately, no. Where is the witch of the hour?

Tara: She said she had something to do. I think shes doing her drama thing, not sure though.

Buffy: Coolio! By the way, you have any idea when this portal shuts? Has it been 12 hours? Should we call Giles?



Tara: NO it should be closed within the next couple of hours. And no need to call Giles. Me and willow kinda looked this demon up our selfs.

Buffy: You did?

Tara: Yeah. It's called, simply "Dragonty". Simple low-level demons name. It calls for power and traps it in its Dominions to take the power for itself. According to its history it is a fairly powerful demon, high up in the chain...

Anya: Not as high up as anyanka!

Tara: But, it ...reancornates.

Buffy: What!

Tara: It can never die. If it is killed its remains just kinda..group back together and start into an egg again. It can't be killed. Thats why its important this portal shuts soon since the book didn't give information on how long this process takes.

Buffy: This is bad! Well, its only 2.30pm, so I'm going for lunch, and tonight when I'm out on patrol, I'll go and check it out. Tara, wanna come?

Tara: Sure. Then I'll go and get willow from her drama class.

Anya: Hurry and leave, you both are scaring away the customers talking about dragon beasts!

Buffy: Thanks Anya, anyway what if willow isn't at drama? I'm sure its not on today.

Tara: Well where else will she be...

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The smell of death overtook the caves. The misty air hovered over the sand and rocks, with fire bursting all around. Then a small crack echoed from stone to stone. A loud shriek came after it. A second later a little red, pointy wing flipped out of the egg shell...



Willow: ι'νє вєєи ωαιтιиg fσя уσυ..

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[1630revellodrive]

wow, i like it, was short!!, need more!!

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Ok thats episode 5 up! With all thats happened in the last week to do with figure series' we are both fine and you will be glad to hear, back on track! I will post a new episode every monday, and SideStrick, every Friday.
I think this episode was quite interesting. I had to get buffy near death in episode 4 and somehow find a way of her living since..you can't kill Buffy! lol. I thought it would be too original to have willow do a little spell and make everythig better as it seems the easy option out, so i got Tara lmao. But then i tried to do another little twist just when you thought..ok..buffy is saved, episode exitment over. Anya saves the day! I love the little thing anya says nearer the end of the episdoe when her, tara and buffy are in the magicbox

"" Tara: Yeah. It's called, simply "Dragonty". Simple low-level demons name. It calls for power and traps it in its Dominions to take the power for itself. According to its history it is a fairly powerful demon, high up in the chain...

Anya: Not as high up as anyanka! ""

Like how she feels good about herself and that she saved the day because to buffy, that is just another near death kill, but to anya this is amazing and to the readers is was quite suprising to see anya on the other end of the axe! I just loved this ending! I didn't originally plan on telling the readers about the demon never actully dying and was going to leave this episode on a kind of "Teachers Pet" ending, with the egg cracking, but loved willow being there, waiting for it! If you notice, willow is holding the potion Tara and Buffy discuss earlier, which means, the only way to actully kill the beast for good...is to kill it with its own venom. Kinda cool! lol hope you all enjoyed and please post with, questions, comments..are much needed and loved! I love reading what you thought and i also love questions to be answered..If you wonder where/ Why there hasn't been a certain character in the storyline so far, just ask because i love the fact of answering all of your questions!

Thanks Alot, Love

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[1630revellodrive]

awwwww how sweet, bless you!. i agree, anya saving the day was weird, but cool!

[Afer]

I think it was nice to see her svae the day since...she never does! lol

[SlayerLV]

Awesome episode, I totally love how Anya saved Buffy. You just had to put a cliffhanger in there didn't you? I can't wait for the next one.

[Deadpool]

Cool episode....good read

[slayer489]

This episode was excellent as was episode 4. I liked the Dragon storyline. The cliffhanger with Willow in the Hell Dimension is great. Can't wait for Episode 6!!! ;D
What's it called and what's it about? and when is it up?

[Afer]

All in a days work for the slayer. The demon is killed and she is just enjoying her simple life..but Sunnydale is never easy..she would never have a simple life. The two crazy deadly vampires that at one point, have rocked Buffy's world are back to Sunnydale to try and persuade spike to join forces with them but to do this they need a plan first...And Darla and Drusilla are just the two vampires to come up with a plan that will only end in blood..

[slayer489]

Episode 6 sound really good! When is it up, afer?

[Afer]

Thanks S489! I'm editing the pictures as we speak. It sould be up by tonight!! I haven't came up with a name yet though!!..

[Girl Power]

OK, Anya redeemed herself.

It was fun to see Tara with strong magic again. I like that theme in your show.

I really liked the shot of the Magic Box with the photos in the background. That looks really good.

Your shot of the dragon emerging from his egg and the water around him looked so cool! What is that water?

The effects in the sand were really good. I loved how it looked when Buffy was buried in the sand.

The end was so awesome! What a surprise! Way to go Willow! And it puts her smiley Willow smile into a whole new context. Great job!

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I think the magic box images come out the best as well! And its not water, just rock (with the contrast up high) I thought i would go for a suttle ending and i think willow does this nicely. She is waiting for these eggs to hatch, so she can kill them. But she doesn't say anything to anyone so the viewers have a sense of a secret just between the reader and Willow!