..::..AFS 1x8- "Timebomb"..::..

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Written By- Afer

Story By-Afer

Photos By- Afer

Script By- Afer

Previously On AFS..

Darla and Dru make a return to the hellmouth



And will go to whatever lengths to get the slayer out of there way whilst they try and contact some old friends..



And with Willow hot on Drusilla's heels..



Time is running out...



"Can i have some more please, sir?"


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Dru: Witches skin is like butter..



Dru: It allows the knife to seep through ever so gently.

Tara: Please, N--



Tara: Araaaaaahhh..




Xander: What was that? Do you think it was-

Spike: It will be. Dru likes it when they scream..

Xander: Where is willow?

Spike: Up ahead. She will be at the mansion by now!

Xander: We should hurry. Willow is gone crazy over this whole thing, she is scaring me!

Spike: In my day, a witch like that..gets the chop!

Xander: If you ever speak about willow like that again, you will be getting the chop!



Willow slowly approached the big wooden doors at the mansion. She held her hand at the heavy wood and it burst open. She slowly walked inside. The cold, moist air hit her face. She could tell only something dead could stay here. As she looked about, searching for her lover all she could see was pilers. She felt like they were closing in on her. She heard another scream that echoed from wall to wall. Her insides caught fire as her eyes filled with rage and despair.



The wooden doors slammed shut behind willow as she stepped further into the open room.



Dru: Ohh, visitors. Maybe miss Edith will get to see Hocus Pocus getting sliced.

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Spike: The door is shut tight.



Xander: Willow is inside! Make it untight..!

Spike: I maybe a vampire with a big package but I'm no bloody Clark bloody Kent!

Xander: Is there another way in?

Spike: Follow me and for god sake be quiet, Dru has hearing like a bloddy..thing with good hearing!



Dru: I like visitors ever so much. Did you bring your basket? I snap.

Willow: Tara- Where is she?

Dru: Gran-ma has already been eaten little red.



Willow: I swear to god, if she is-

Tara: Willow, I'm-
Drusilla growled and grabbed willow by the arms

Dru: Be...In Me..

Willow: I have a girlfriend thanks

She didn't have time to respond and by the time she did Drusilla was sinking her teeth deep into willow's neck. She felt shooting pains run up to her neck as all her power drained from her system. Her sight started to go dizzy as her knees got weaker.



Willow looked up and seen a load of boxes loaded on top of each other. Her chest exploded with fire and came right up and shot out of her eyeballs. The boxes exploded as tons of objects fell from the sky. A heavy white statue hit Drusilla on the head. She pulled away from willow's neck in pain before another..and another until she was buried in all the statues.




Willow: Tara..Where are you?

Tara: Willow: I'm up here. Willow..Help me..



Willow: Tara
She whispered as she made her way to the second landing.



Willow: Baby..are you alright?

Tara: I'm fine just please get me out of here. This portal is just Glisser rocks round me protecting me.



Willow: I'll get you out! I can destroy one stone and the rest will crumble.

Acrushum Ardmain Erdmin

Dru: Wolf is not happy with riding hood. She must be punished..






Willow: Oh Tara i was so worried!

Tara: I was so scared! But i knew you would come for me!




Dru: I knew you would come as well deary. Don't think that you are hidden with your red cape.



Willow got a tingle in her spine as she felt Drusilla's presence. She whipped round and was trapped in a corner with Drusilla standing in front of her.

Tara: Willow, be carefully!



Dru: Let the wolf take the girl. And take the girl and then-
A window smashed in front of Drusilla, knocking her back from willow. Willow fled from the corner back over to Tara. A second later a loud growl followed by a large man dressed in black with a disformed face and fangs. The bleach blonde hair reflected in Drusilla's eyes...Spike.

..::..Tune In Next Week..::..

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Again..all comments and/or questions on the series or basically anything about the show is happily answered! Thanks for all those who are still loyal to the show and let me say, it can only get better so stay tuned! For those who read but don't post, please, even if it is just something little like "Keep it up" "a good read" anything because the more replies i receive, the more positive i feel about the show! Thanks again

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[Kenobi]

I loved this episode. I've loved all of them so far. I also really liked the effects. Keep up the good work!

[Girl Power]

Oh, I love this! Buffyville just told me about your series. I think you wrote me before, but I couldn't remember whose it was. I was actually looking for it here yesterday!

Anyway, this is great. I really love the way that you create the dialogue to be so much like what the real characters would say.

I loved all of Drusilla's lines. They are so creepy and perverted nursey rhyme type of things, just like Drusilla really is! It was awesome. I felt like it was her!

I loved Willow's line, "I already have a girlfriend." That was classic.

I liked Xander and Spike's interactions. I could really feel Xander in that.

Really excellent! Great creativity with Drusilla's torture of Tara. I have to go back and find all your old stuff later tonight when I'm online again.

Great story!

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girlpower said:

I loved all of Drusilla's lines. They are so creepy and perverted nursery rhyme type of things, just like Drusilla really is! It was awesome. I felt like it was her!

I loved Willow's line, "I already have a girlfriend" That was classic.

I liked Xander and Spike's interactions. I could really feel Xander in that.

Thanks GP! I'm glad you liked it! I'm glad you noticed Drusilla's speech in this episode. It is very specific what she referrers too each of them as. She feels this is all a game of "Little Red Riding Hood" and referrers to willow as the little girl who is "Hidden with her cape" which is referring to her magic which actually is a strong reflection to willows later addiction. She refers to Tara as the Gran and her as the wolf. I think Drusilla is a very sexual character and she is crazy and her mind does play out like this so it is tricky on how you write her because you don't want to go over the top but then again..you don't want her to sound normal because you couldn't Imagen Drusilla speaking normal and you wouldn't feel that sense of comfort with that specific character so yes, she is a fruit loop!

Xander and Spike i also know don't get on so when i write them having a normal conversation i have to remember to twist it at the last minute and turn it into an argument.

Willow's speech was kind of weak in this episode i thought because when she is high on magic and on a mission, she really isn't the most chattiest person. So to throw in a line like :I have a girlfriend" is kind of light-hearted fun for me! I prefer going all out with quotes on Anya but she wasn't in this episode. There was an older episode where Anya talks about the playboy magazine in front of willow and Tara and that makes them cringe but also makes the readers laugh and think.."that is so Anya".

Well keep up the comments and questions because as you can read, i love having questions asked because i give big lengthy answers! lol so keep them up! Thanks

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[Girl Power]

I love all the Drusilla dialogue. She's so weird in a really specific way. I think you have captured that really well.

I'm glad you explained it. I didn't get that the cape was Willow's magic, or the reference to Tara as the grandmother in Little Red Riding Hood. I thought it was random and it reminded me of how she calls Darla Grandmum. Thanks for explaining that. I love it!

I always used to try to figure out what the hell Dru was talking about in the show, but I never did. It's nice to get the inside explanation. You're really good at dialogue!

I just finished reading the whole series. It's great. I like how you started with the Dru/Darla story, had the Dragon side track it, but came back to Dru and Darla.

I love those two girl together.

I hope that you'll show Buffy's phone conversation with Angel. I love crossovers!

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girlpower said:

I just finished reading the whole series. It's great. I like how you started with the Dru/Darla story, had the Dragon side track it, but came back to Dru and Darla!

I'm glad you noticed this because i don't like the fact that one whole season has the same storyline throughout, just adding bits as each episode is aired. In the real Buffy series they do not rely on the one storyline throughout the whole season eg. Season 5, yes Glory was the main storyline, but there are other episodes in there such as "Family". I like the fact of dropping the main storyline (Dru and Darla) and having a random new story for a couple of episodes but the dragon episodes still fit in because i had mentions of Darla and Dru in these episodes, linking them up. It is refreshing to read a new episode and not have like my series is just now, the one storyline dragged throughout.

I hope that you'll show Buffy's phone conversation with Angel. I love crossovers!

Well i don't like the fact of having a scene from the show and turning it into my AFS so the phone call thing is most probably a definite No-No. As for the crossover thing..Season 2 is started being photographed and you might have a few suprises..but I'm not confirming anything..All I'm saying on the matter is Never Say Never

[SideStrike]

I Liked this episode! And I really like the graphics. This is definitely one of the best episodes yet! Great job! Im really excited for the next episode to see if Willow turns into a vampire!

[Afer]

As much fun as that sounds seeing Willow a vampire, she didn't drink from Drusilla and all the boxes exploded over Dru before any serious damge was done to Willow, they will just become war wounds! It is a little early to post info on episode 9 so i'll leave it until about Wednesday or something. More comments are welcome!

Thanks to everyone who has already left there say!

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The Show Must Go On..That isn't the title for the next episode BTW! lol

"Crash and Burn

Drusilla is in trouble now. With Darla abandoned her back to L.A, She is left to fend for herself when she has to take on Spike, Willow, Xander and Tara. But who will prevail? This is the showdown you don't want to miss...